Monday, April 4, 2011

Journal 4/4/11 Dialogue

My characters are best friends. Abigale lives on a southern plantation. She has befriended one of her family's slaves, Kinie. The friendship is kept a secret from Abigale's parents. Abigale helps free Kinie, by sneaking her out to a house along the underground rail road one night.

Kinie wake up!
hmm? what?
Shhh stay quiet, I'm sneaking you out, now.
What if your parents wake up?
They already are awake, fathers patrolling the perimeter of the farm, but I know how were going to get out.
How can we? It's to risky, if your dad sees you... you know how mad he will, your not even supposed to talk to me! Whats your plan? We can never hop the fence, your father would see us.
Through the house, my father will never expect it, and mother is alseep. I left the back door unlocked, we will sneak through the fields around to the back, then we go inside. Once his in the front of the house, we run in. Then we wait until hes in the back of the house, then we exit through the front door, and we move north in the river. There's a safe house only a mile north.

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